Help with my book plz and thx?

The first answer might be rude, but is spot on. Your story is very unoriginal and could be thought of by millions of others, actually it has been thought of by millions of others. I have been in this section since I had my first account and I'm always seeing stories just like this. No one is interested(or at least not those with great taste) in story going on about school. Also no one with great taste in stories would bother with a whole paragraph dedicated to a typical teenage character not wanting to get up.